Ain't It the Truth Writing Contest Winner

Marcia Hurlow
Star Rating
★★★★★
Reviewer's Rating
Oct 20, 2017

The Readers Advisory committee is pleased to announce that Marcia Hurlow has won our Ain't It the Truth poetry contest for her poem Maps. We love how simply so much is conveyed and how well the poet utilizes maps to illustrate a shrinking world.

Marcia L. Hurlow is the author of six collections of poetry. Her most recent chapbook, Brushstrokes on Water, was published by Finishing Line Press in January, and her full-length collection, Anomie, won the Edges Prize at WordTech. Her poems have appeared in various journals, including Poetry, Poetry Northwest, Nimrod, Poetry Wales, Stand, Miramar, The Iconoclast, Hawaii Pacific Review, Malahat Review and Mudfish.

MAPS

Be careful what you love.

Beware of loving

bees, the underside

of maple leaves, perfume

made with wildflowers,

dogs running in their sleep,

the maze of gyri

that puzzles under the skull.

My mother loved maps.

She loved tracing the blue

lines, the red lines, looking

up the cities that bloomed

on those stems.  She loved

to find their music, recipes

for food whose spices never

existed at her grocery.

She loved Dad’s stories

of towns he’d seen in Europe.

Even blighted by war

they were lovely on maps

though she’d never fly

to those gold circles,

ornate as Greek myths.

And as maps of neurons

crossed and disappeared

with age she forgot the map

of her hometown that got her

to her sister’s house, brought

her milk and bread.  Off that

shrinking grid were storms

and monsters.  As we talked

in her yellow kitchen,

the snow gathered like nests

in branches of the maples. 

The buzz of a dying

bulb above us, I asked

about her trips to California,

Nevada and a week

in downtown Cleveland.

What a small map to travel

compared to her dreams.

So this is what love does:

reshapes thought, the last

synapses of memory. She

leaned in, confided that on

the way to Paris, she and Dad

had landed in London

just to say they’d been there.  

 

 

Reviewed by Helen H.
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